Producing an Incoherent Answer:
One of the worst things you can do to put off the teacher or examiner
marking your paper is to write incoherently. That is, your thoughts and ideas
are badly expressed and very difficult for the marker to understand. In short,
your writing does not make sense.
Imagine that you are the person who has to mark hundreds of test or exam
papers. You could be very tired by the time you reach for another paper to
mark. Then to your horror, you realise that this particular student’s answers
are incoherent. You have to read and re-read each of his or her answers before
you understand what he or she is trying to say. Worst of all, you may not even
understand what he or she is trying to say!
In situations like this, how would you grade the student’s answers?
Would you want to spend more time on his or her other similarly incoherent
answers? Probably not.
The thing about incoherent writing is that students who write like that
do not realise that only they themselves understand what they are writing
about!
The only way to make sure that you do not write incoherently in a test
or exam paper is to write more often. Below are the suggested measures:
- Write an essay on
any topic you want.
- Check through your
essay at least twice to make sure that you yourself understand what you
are writing.
- Ask somebody who
has a better command of English than you (e.g., your friends, classmates,
teachers or family members) to proofread your essays for you. The more
persons you can get to proofread your essays, the better.
- Find out which
parts of your essay they have understood and which parts they have
difficulty understanding.
- Ask them how you
could have rewritten those parts that they do not understand.
- Ask yourself
whether their suggested rewriting of those parts is easier to understand
than what you have written.
- Discover where you
have gone wrong in your initial write-up and try not to repeat such
mistakes again in future.
- Proceed to step 1
above and repeat the process.